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NAR: While everyone is helping out around the camp, you look up from doing laundry and see Philimp standing by himself. He looks lost.

 

Child: Is everything okay, Philimp?

 

Aristocrat: Yes! I am perfectly fine! Peachy, even. #surprised

 

NAR: You hold up a crumpled shirt.

 

Child: Do you want to help?

 

Aristocrat: Ah… #confused

Aristocrat: I don’t...know. #confused

 

Child: Okay.

 

//five second delay?

 

Aristocrat: I should clarify: I don’t know how.

Aristocrat: At my estate, the servants handled the day to day menial tasks.

Aristocrat: It was not seen as...appropriate for someone of my stature to partake. Beneath me, even.

 

Child: So you didn’t have to do chores? #surprised

 

Aristocrat: No.

 

Child: Isn’t that great?!

 

Aristocrat: I suppose? But... #confused

 

Child: What?

 

Aristocrat: Why do you do it? #confused

 

Child: Someone has to. If it isn’t washed, we’d have to wear stinky clothes!

 

Aristocrat: True! And no one wants that! #laughing

Aristocrat: I admit, it feels...wrong, standing here. Not doing anything. Like I’m missing something.

 

Child: I can show you how to do it. You don’t have to stand there anymore, and you can help!

 

Aristocrat: It can’t be too hard, could it? If I, Philimp the Sixth of the venerable Ystachio dynasty, cannot help others and fold clothes, I do not deserve my titles! #happy

 

NAR: Philimp tried folding the laundry today.

NAR: While he was away scavenging for food, Grandma did it again.

Script-writing Excerpt: Thread

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The Concert, Outside

Scene Goal: The main character slowly loses their enthusiasm as they come into contact with triggers. Triggers shake their resolve.

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[PLAYER opens their eyes and sighs, taking in the sight; Phone vibrates with Text]

 

TEXT: Where are u?

 

[PLAYER uses speech to text, holding phone up to their face]

 

PLAYER: Courtyard. North of stadium.

 

TEXT: U actually coming? Sweet! You won’t regret it, promise! :D Remember, r4 s33 

 

PLAYER: Four, thirty-three. Got it. Love you.

 

TEXT: lottsa <3 Cya there!

 

[PLAYER puts away their phone (use a click noise to emphasize that the convo has ended? It’s anachronistic in this day and age, I know)]

 

[PLAYER begins to walk, and it should be relatively peaceful until minigames begin]

 

[FIND THE BOMB trigger/mini-game begins]

[Triggered by proximity to first ‘bomb’]

 

VOICE: Don’t look.

 

[each line after this is said after a ‘bomb’ is investigated]

 

VOICE: There’s nothing.

 

VOICE: You know it’s nothing. So why do you still do it?

 

VOICE: You are not there anymore, on deployment! You’re back home! You don’t have to do this!

 

VOICE: Ignore it. Just...push...it...away...somehow.

 

[FIND THE BOMB mini-game ends]

 

PLAYER: What the fuck is happening?

 

VOICE: Ignore it. Just ignore it.

 

VOICE: Compress. Decompress. You’re still good.

 

[FIND THE SNIPER trigger/mini-game begins]

 

[Triggered by the noise of a car that backfires; each line is said after a window is looked at]

 

VOICE: Don’t look, don’t look...

 

VOICE: You’re doing it again.

 

VOICE: And again.

 

VOICE: And again. Like a broken machine.

 

[FIND THE SNIPER mini-game ends]

 

PLAYER: Not now...not again.

 

VOICE: [impatient] Charlie mike. Don’t have time for this.


 

[Concert is in sight over the tops of some buildings]

 

VOICE: There it is. Finally.

 

[PLAYER rounds the final building and seeing the crowd, freezes and sucks in a breath]

 

VOICE: It’s just people. Just people. A helluva lot, but still. Still thinking of flaking?

 

PLAYER: Hell no! ...no choice...

 

VOICE: Damn straight.

 

[Crowd thickens, PLAYER breathing becomes heavier]

 

VOICE: You got this.

 

[Crowd closes around you as you move forward; Heighten tension with vibration and sounds]

 

PLAYER: [muttering] Agh. Sorry, sorry. Coming through. Sorry. Fuck.

 

VOICE: It’s just like basic. Basic, you hear me? Marching in rows, the only sounds the thunder of your boots and the roar of the platoon...repeat after me: Left. Left. Left right left…

C-130 rollin’ down the strip,

got a broke ass-trooper

on a one way trip.

Mission top secret,

destination unknown, 

don't even know if he's ever comin' home.

 

[PLAYER hums to the tune as they walk into the concert]

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